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Creative Writing

Last week, during creative writing club, we looked at a style in Poetry, called ‘Cento’. We spent time looking at Shakespeare quotes about Chess. We created a variation on the Cento by using the lines of Shakespeare. Please enjoy!

Chess in Shakespeare

A horse! A horse! My days delight.
I amble up and down in a skipping mode.
My life, I never held but as a pawn.
But as a pawn to wage against thine enemies; not fear to lose, the safety being the motive.
Was that the king that spurred his kingdom?
Great shouts within all cry ‘the wonderful king.’
Great is the rumour defend a king should rule well.
The mean knight echoes ‘come not near our queen’
No friends for you knight
Friend or foe
You are a rascal hath
Uneasy lies the head that wears the helmet in honour of the Queen.
My days delight has past, my horse is gone.
Farewell sweet queen
All my mates have gone now.
My mate that’s never to be found again.
By Rifah  25.04.2013

Shakespeare and chess

A king! A king!
The king and queen there!
There stands the castle.
I have his horse.
Give me another horse
So the good horse is mine.
The rascal had removed my horse.
We need the knights ready to begin their triumph.
Ah! A wandering knight.
Oh no, what have I done,
I’m in checkmate silly me!
I can finally assassin the queen.
Oh no, you don’t, your in checkmate.
So I declare a draw but we will come back
By: Manveer 25.04.2013

Reversed Poetry

I love the way the sun fills up my soul

I love the way the sun fills up my soul,
With utter joy and pleasure.
I love using my spade to dig a hole,
And in the hole I might discover some treasure
In the hole I might discover some treasure
I love using my spade to dig a hole,
With utter joy and pleasure,
I love the way the sun fills up my soul

Jasmine and Rifah 02.05.13

manu

Man united are the best!

They never ever fail the test.
Man United play with their hearts,
never giving up and never fail their task.
Man United are the best in the world
Never giving up and never fail their task
Man United play with their hearts,
They never ever fail the test
Man United are the best!
Manveer 02.05.2013

Manu-1
Man United are the best!

Man United are the best than all the rest,
Lobbing the ball
In the goal makers
Man United are really more important than the rest
Man United are the best than all the rest!
Man United play from their hearts,
So they can never fail their task,
Man United are the best than all the rest!
So they can never fail their task,
Man United play from their hearts
Man United are the best than all the rest!
Man United are really more important than the rest
In the goal makers
Lobbing the ball
Man United are the best!
—Amrit 02.05.2013

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Cheese

Cheese is gross and smelly
If I had cheese
I would leave it from the start.
This is crazy cheese!
It gets eaten,
Even though it is food, it’s crazy!
It gets eaten
This is crazy cheese!
I would leave it from the start
If I had cheese
Cheese is gross and smelly.
Krish   02.05.2013

Poems about directions!

North South East West

In the North I can see the forest with trees big and bold surrounded by the school gates.
I can see the branches reaching up like bony fingers.
I can see the bony fingers reaching to the sky.

In the South I can see a school full of learning and full of intelligent children.
I can see them impatiently putting their hand up desperately waiting to shout out the answer.
I can see the teacher explaining out a word problem.

In the East I can see sky scrapers in the middle of high street.
I can see the busy high street packed with people going in and out of shops. I can see people enjoying themselves.

In the west I can see and feel the wild wind blowing away everything in its path like a tornado.
I can also see the wind waving to the blue sky.
I can see the blue sky empty with no animals in sight.

By Annpreet

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7 Responses to “Creative Writing”

  1. ha-ha-ha…..

  2. Hi Manveer
    I’m glad you like your work on the blog and it’s true what you say, looking back after you’re written it, you feel more proud and you see it in a different way! Nice to have you on the blog, Manveer!

  3. MrsV,

    please tell us mrs Van

  4. rifah01,

    which lesson was that?

  5. When I see my work it looks ssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooo good

  6. Hi Rifah! I’m glad you enjoyed it. It was fun for me too, also to see how much you all were enjoying it! Surprise! Not tell you now what’s coming up… 🙂

  7. Hi miss van

    today club was awesome,
    what are we doing next week?

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