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Nose-Nibbler and Sophie

In Y5 we have been reading the story of the BFG and Y5’s have been writing their own new chapter – and added a new character – to the story of the BFG. Please enjoy Harnoor’s chapter. If you wish, please leave her some positive comments about her writing.

“Crash!” A bolt of thunder flashed across the banks of the lake. Just nearby, Sophie tried to sprint away, to go back to the orphanage. As the raindrops began to grow bigger, the wind become more wild and Sophie wasn’t quite able to walk in these terrible weather conditions! Then she stopped! She peered out the cave from a distance and saw a shadow appeared. As she tiptoed closer, the shadow grew bigger and bigger!

“What’s that… I’ve never seen it before…” Sophie whispered, with a peculiar facial expression. Later on, the shadow was too close and Sophie slowly lifted her face upwards…towards…A mysterious-looking face, which had a red round nose and petite ears, was looking back at her. “I wonder what this is?” Sophie thought, “but I think I heard about it before…. I think it’s called the Nose- Nibb-…”

 “Oh, enough of the whispering, kid!!” Nose-Nibbler roared, reaching out towards Sophie, interrupting her thoughts viciously. Sophie was startled, but not even a bone in her body moved!  “Now enough of that, you snotcumber, cockroach! Tell me where the BFG is!” roared Nose-Nibbler.

“Why was he asking all these weird questions to a little girl like me”, Sophie thought by herself. “No! I won’t tell you and why do you want him, anyway?” Sophie said, being quite a mature and brave child for her age.  If she had said even a word more, she would have been in deep…. deep trouble!

After a few seconds, Nose-Nibbler grabbed hold of Sophie and brought her slowly up to his face. Terrified and petrified Sophie stared at him! As fast as lightning, Sophie said, “Let me go! You ugly, nasty giant! I know why you want the BFG! You are jealous of him!” she shouted bravely.

Sophie had heard that Nose-Nibbler was packed with greed and jealousy, so she took a brave step to say, whilst shivering, ” You’re too greedy, grumpy, an old fff-fat and uu-unhealthy giant!! Let me go, ugh!” Sophie started to panic, however the poor orphan managed to escape from the gooey hands of the ugly fierce-looking giant. She thought she had gone too far! Maybe she shouldn’t have said these words! However, it was too late! Nose-Nibbler’s face turned as red as a tomato! It was the most petrifying moment Sophie could ever imagined! 

“Smart kid! Tell me where the BFG is, you… you…!” bellowed Nose-Nibbler as loud and fiercely as he could. Just then, Sophie heard a voice echoing along the road and in an instant, the BFG was there!

“Oi, What is you doing with my Sophie?!” exclaimed the BFG in a surprised tone to Nose-Nibbler. “If you where a little girl, like poor old Sophie and some random giants is picking you up, would you like this? All I is meaning to say is that you are a really mean and cruel as a techerpuffin-fog!” said the BFG with a long-lasting sigh at the end.

Thinking about it, Nose-Nibbler said quietly, “Oh! I am so sorry! Can we be friends, please?” — written by Harnoor


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