Y5’s have been working on their own similes and metaphors. Can you recognise a metaphor or a simile from their writing?
Gursimran: She is a golden star, glowing on deep, dark nights. Her smooth hair is dropping waves of the sea. Her face is the soft layers of warm, comfy blankets. Her voice is like a melody, born from the goddess of Venus.
Kiran: She is a ball of glimmering sunshine, brightening up our way. Her hair tumbles, flows and drifts in the wind. His laughter is a gentle sparkling melody, as fresh as a breeze in the early morning.
Ruben: His hair is the mountains of the landscape, visible everywhere.
Harnoor: The blank page is a gallery of imagination, dancing in the empty landscape